• Try outs are looking great – think about how / when you will use these in your video – nice effect with the stop motion • For the images of your actors and the costumes you will chose – explain how you want to represent them through their appearance, age, gender, costume choices – you could also refer to how these elements link to the genre of the track – you’ve got some material here but it needs a bit more detail. • You still need a detailed storyboard and shot list – make sure that you spend a good amount of time on these. • Try to show how you are developing your creative ideas – e.g. how will you use narrative / performance? Illustration / disjuncture / amplification? Intertextuality? Again – use stills from other videos, shot drafts for your own video. • For each post try to go beyond just describing what you are doing – say more about how it links with other video promos, justify how your ideas develop, etc. • Developing well – keep focusing on these ideas to hit L4 / A
• Try outs are looking great – think about how / when you will use these in your video – nice effect with the stop motion
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• You still need a detailed storyboard and shot list – make sure that you spend a good amount of time on these.
• Try to show how you are developing your creative ideas – e.g. how will you use narrative / performance? Illustration / disjuncture / amplification? Intertextuality? Again – use stills from other videos, shot drafts for your own video.
• For each post try to go beyond just describing what you are doing – say more about how it links with other video promos, justify how your ideas develop, etc.
• Developing well – keep focusing on these ideas to hit L4 / A
Thank you for the feedback, I will go through my work and make improvements as well as making sure my future posts are up to the same standard.
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